June 13th Narratives

Here are a selection of short stories from Room 11. We have been learning about setting the scene for the beginning, creating a problem for the middle and solving the problem for the ending.

Here are our exciting narratives, which were inspired by our story spinners. The key words were toy, ancient times, mountains, courageous and lost. 

One ancient time there was a courageous toy, who went up a high mountain. The bear woke up and the toy ran away. Another toy came and helped him. They got married and they lived happily ever after. By Sophia and Stella

One day at an icy mountain in the ancient times, there was a toy that was a cowboy. The cowboy was one-eyed. He was on a steaming volcano. Then it blasted. So, he jumped off the volcano. The cowboy broke his leg. The cowboy said, “Help me, help me.” A little boy came by and helped him. He took him to the hospital. A week later the cowboy was alright. 

By Kalan and Oskah

One day a clumsy toy was walking up a very hot hill, because it was a volcano and it was going to erupt. Boom it was so loud when it erupted. the toy lost his leg when it erupted. He searched and searched. Then he found a doctor and made a leg. Then he built a new leg and put it on. It was the shiniest leg ever. By Ruby and Samantha

One hot summer’s day a toy lived on top of a volcano. A grizzly bear was creeping behind him. The  volcano started to rumble and the lava was pouring down. She ran into the forest. She realised that she was lost. She had a walk around and she found a home made out of flowers. She was very happy.  By Izzy

One day at an icy mountain in the ancient times, there was a toy that was a cowboy. The cowboy was one-eyed. He found a gigantic volcano that rumbled and grumbled. The volcano blasted up. Then he flew up and boom. He blew up. He was never seen again. The end. By Kian

One day in the olden days there was a toy cowboy that was funny. His bedroom was shaking and rumbling, too. It shot up to the moon. He went, too. He had a machine that sucks lava. It sucked it all up. He put concrete all over it. Then he made a car to find a new home. By Lily-May and Zach