Last Thursday Room 11 thought of some amazing adjectives together for a trout and then wrote descriptive, interesting stories. Here are a few of them.
One day there was a rainbow trout swimming as fast as a rocket and it was diving out and in the water. Then a shark came to eat the rainbow trout. However, the shark got sick!
By Stella and Mandy
Once upon a time there were two little fish called Kalan and Oskah. The colour of the fish was a rainbow one. The two fish saw a shark. So, they zoomed away, but the shark swallowed the two little fish up!
By Kalan and Oskah.
There's one thing I had to see. That is a scary fish, scary fish, scary fish swimming in the sea. He was swimming in the sea and his colour was black and it was green.
By Marvel and CG
Once upon a time we saw a trout. It was amazing and beautiful. I felt the trout. It was scaly It's body is dotty. When he went home, he saw a gigantic worm. He ate it and he exploded!
By Kian
One morning a rainbow trout woke up in a shiny river. He was very spotty. Suddenly, he was getting pulled. He was shocked! There was a hook pulling him. Then he escaped by flicking off the hook. After that he saw a ginormous worm. It looked so scrumptious!
By Ruby
Well done Room 11, there are some great verbs selected in here too, eg Flicking, exploded and zoomed. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing Room 11, I really enjoyed reading your stories! I think I might go and see if I can catch a Rainbow Trout of my own? Annie McKechnie (Shayes Mum).
ReplyDeleteWow! What amazing stories Room 11. Lucy Goodchap
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptive writing Room 11. Keep up the great work, from Kian's Mum.
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ReplyDeletethat's is really great work room 11 keep it up............marval's mum.
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